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...............forty years uncovered...............
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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forty years uncovered all little children sing and dance given a little freedom’s chance they have that gift deep in their soul they can inspire rock and roll Rod on my left, Neil on my right see how I made it through my nights chasing Sloopy down a cowboy’s trail hearing Sweet Caroline in Neil’s wail forty years gone, now knowing why their very words could make me cry I’ll bare yet these questions in me as layer by layer I loosen free that which is in the heart of me underneath music’s poetry long long ago in my sweet teens I’d drop the moon to bring me dreams warm, touching warm left me in awe while Stanyan Street’s song left me raw so ask me not who has inspired my love of words or how transpired my muse who now brings forth to me what gifts I share by writing free and if there be a dream come true I would bring Rod and Neil to you for they would help you to see why my soul is moved, these tears to cry that which is in the heart of me underneath music’s poetry |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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forty years gone, now knowing why their very words could make me cry I’ll bare yet these questions in me as layer by layer I loosen free that which is in the heart of me underneath music’s poetry ===================================== so ask me not who has inspired my love of words or how transpired my muse who now brings forth to me what gifts I share by writing free and if there be a dream come true I would bring Rod and Neil to you for they would help you to see why my soul is moved, these tears to cry that which is in the heart of me underneath music’s poetry ================================= youre in damn fine company my friend... as are we when we join you on your posts. VERY COOL poem Sun...  slow burn ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I forgot to say... Good morning SUN   slow burn ... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JanetMarie my little imp! You are too kind in your remarks, and so inspired in your graphics! Good morning right back at you! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, it sound like welcome to the forties club, a few years under the belt and heaps and heaps more to go. If I am right, Happy birthday, I wish you all the happiness in the world. Be well. Rick By the way, nice read!!! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah - Then there was "Good Morning Sunshine"... from the other one... |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
It's funny how music plays such a part in everyones life..........everyone has their own soundtrack I guess? Yours seems familiar but different. Words and music are very powerful don't you think? Stay warm Jon |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
This actually brought a little tear to my eye...it's amazing how a song can transport us back...there are some I hear that even remind me of certain SMELLS from a certain time. If Neil and Rod were the inspiration for your beautiful words, then they are more talented than I ever gave them credit for! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Theirs are some of the most poetic songs that have ever been written! It's easy to see that you are filled with their inspiration! [This message has been edited by Denise (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I can say is AMEN, so very accurate in all of this writing. (I saw Neil Diamond in concert on TV last night, still as wonderful as ever  )Much enjoyed miss Sunshine, as always. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
When goodies were olden And Diamond was golden When Mathis was my make-out muse The Beach boys were hoppin' As we were do-woppin' Sinatra was king of the blues..... Ah, yes, the memories..... (tomorrow night |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Memories kiss our soul, and make us laugh and tear..very nice write, Sissie..very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you just have to know I loved it! Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
ah yes, memories...isn't it true that as the years progress we strive to create better ones and yet the oldest of these will never quite compare? Nice work! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derfully reminiscent. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Ah......memories.....and memories A very lovely and wonderful piece. Thank you *********************** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A wonderful write, enjoyed |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Part of me is still written in the words of songs. Thanks for reminding me! |
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