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Open Poetry #15

The Truth

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

0 posted 2001-07-30 10:01 AM

I have solved the riddle
The answer to the equation
No more "Monkey in the Middle"
Much to my elation

Caught inside uncertainty
I have sought the Truth
Lost within perplexity
I discovered the Uncouth

Now I find myself so freed
Able to move on
I have a friend in need
And must sing him a song

I must go try to soothe him
Out of his despair
Help thwart the darkness grown within
If he needs me, I'll be there

A pile of words and promises broken
Only one promise remains true
The only pledge by me first spoken:
When I pledged my love to you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-30 10:27 AM

last verse says it all... nicely done

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-07-30 11:15 AM

When you love somebody
you are always there.
very nice.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-07-30 11:25 AM

ShannonM,
Nice write enjoyed the read.

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

4 posted 2001-07-30 05:51 PM

Thank you to all of you.

ShannonM

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