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azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2001-07-28 06:53 PM

With a fevered touch that was like heaven to her
She clung on tightly and let the world blur
Passionate kisses that left her knees weak
So many kisses that words could not creep

His hands kept on roaming to places of desire
He lifted her up and she felt his hot fire
Leaning on the wall to keep her standing
And answering to his touch hot and demanding

Then suddenly he was gone in the blink of an eye
Though she still felt his heat on the skin of her thigh
A passion collided in the dark corner of night
She knew in an instant something was not right

Seeking him out in the crowded lobby bar
She witnessed a scene more intense by far
There in the midst of her awakened wet dream
Her lover not as perfect as he once did seem

A woman was there next to her quick date
And in an instant she learned how to hate
For this woman was dressed completely in white
And the man had become her husband tonight.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

1 posted 2001-07-28 08:26 PM

Wow.

Shannon

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2001-07-28 10:26 PM

lol...thanks Shannon, and welcome to Passions!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-07-29 02:14 AM

Perhaps it's worth the rush...or maybe we should fall slowly as Sven wrote. Both have their rewards. Well done!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-07-29 02:18 AM

This is a wise poem very well expressed with a great flow and rhyme-scheme. I'm impressed~

Melissa~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-29 01:45 PM

Intense -- rather like straight driving at a 120mph... into the side of a building.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-29 01:50 PM

Wow, powerful write with a punch. Nicely done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-07-29 01:53 PM

Very nice work.....peace!!

Nathan

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-07-29 02:39 PM

Ouch, what an ending!
Sandra

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

9 posted 2001-07-29 04:20 PM

I love writing pieces with shock value!

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