Open Poetry #15 |
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Pretty |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert ![]() |
Someone called me pretty today And it took me by surprise It has been so long since I’ve felt Pretty in someone’s eyes He wasn’t looking for a thank you He didn’t know I’d heard But I blushed and felt so very flattered By such a simple word I smiled like I haven’t And strutted about in pride Someone called me pretty today And it warmed my heart inside So I called someone pretty tonight She was someone I didn’t know But I felt so good from my compliment And I wanted that good to grow So as I shopped in the grocery store I pointed to an older cashier Said in a voice she could hear “My she’s pretty isn’t she dear?” And she was truly lovely And her face took quite a glow So if you see someone pretty (or handsome) You should let them know And remember beauty isn’t just outside But inside all of us too To treat each other with kindness No matter what else in life we do. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, as my old grandmum was so fond of saying, "pretty is, as pretty does", and you did a very nice job of being pretty...nice write...gentle smile |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I never knew how much it meant to be treated with kindness...until I was treated callously. Thanks for the reminder that I can make someones day with a considerate word. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good advice and a pleasant read. Thanks. Melton |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I agree totaly! Beauty on the inside is of the upmost, and to pass a kind word is to show your inner beauty. Good poem, pretty one. Deb ![]() |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Isn't it funny how those simple lessons we learned as children are the ones repeated throughout life?? Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
This was sweet and poignant. As long as a compliment is stated honestly and with no ulterior motive, then indeed, it is a genuinely good thing which can make someone happy, and you have illustrated this very nicely here. Congratulations on a powerful realization. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you Mark. That was indeed my motive. |
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