Open Poetry #15 |
. . . Wild fire . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
desirable thoughts fond memories rekindled passion unharnessed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Interloper... I enjoyed as usual... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
oh my.... |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Hmm...like i've said before i'm not a big fan of Haiku...but i liked this one! This wildfire is what got me into some problems. Thanks for sharing, God BLess, Jeremy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I had just read how 4 lives were just lost in a wild fire in Washington while fighting it, so I wasn't quite expecting what I came into. It works quite well for your intended use, though, just came in from a bad angle at first. You certainly do senryus very well!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ This one sizzles~ I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"passion unharnessed" now that is the center of this fire. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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