Open Poetry #15 |
Fallen Angel |
Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
Fallen Angel He would wait for her each night, and when she would walk into the room, seeing him would put a smile upon her lips and a tinkling of laughter in the air. He was her angel... Over time, his gentle, caring manner opened up those hidden places she locked from all others. She shared her deepest secrets with him. Her heartaches and her triumphs ... and it was a soothing balm to her soul. He was her confidant... He had a way about him that touched her heart. His opinion of her was always greater than her own, telling her she could do anything, making her believe she could take on the world. He was her friend... But then the heavenly clouds of illusion began to dissipate, showing not an angel, but a mere man, left standing on a pedastal that she had too hastily constructed and unknowingly made too tall. He was a man of many faces... He was still a good person, and she was eager for an excuse to relight her smile... But he failed her, substituting a lie for the hope that she was craving. He was her betrayer... So, that deeply seeded saftey switch, installed in her heart by years of heartbreak ... tripped... Leaving his pedastal and him to stand in the shadows, untouched by the the rays of her light... she turned and walked sadly away. He was her fallen angel... [This message has been edited by Miranda (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In so many ways do I understand the words as penned here... well done Miranda... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes.... this is very nicely done... a story in and of itself... I enjoyed! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A brilliant write....well done, Miranda!! Nathan |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now did I tell you the story about my angel, no? Well that is another hour call? Loved it, loved it! whoo hooo too! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is sadly beautiful. Good write alan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose mere mortals cannot be angels and angels cannot be mortals...yes we are only human and must forgive and expect to be forgiven in turn...hard lessons to be learned...James |
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