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Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2002-02-28 07:02 PM

Theres some fellings inside
That I cannot deny
it's no use
no matter how hard I try
I've taken many paths
along the way
in my pathetic attempt
to make an escape
In the end
this prooves to be true
All my roads
lead right back to you

It's been so long now
I want to forget
the memories we made
and the day we met
my hearts still torn
and my minds a strew
I need so badly
to get over you
my lifes been on hold
since you went away
I have to break out
I can't keep living this way

Your hands are strong
and they grabbed me tight
but you can let go now
I get the point
Your life's continued
so why can't mine?
I don't think my demands
are way out of line
You've taken so much
it's time to give
so get out of my heart
and let me live...

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

[This message has been edited by Jenabou (02-28-2002 07:21 PM).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-28 07:20 PM

i hope that your heart is free soon..::hugs::..i can relate..great poem

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2002-03-01 07:14 PM

WOW!

What a spellbinding read! Simply amazing..... one of the best I've read. Quick paced, no stumbling, very smooth....

I'm in awe....

Great words here.... I can truely being to feel what you are feeling....

Wonderfuly done!

~ Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2002-03-06 05:28 AM

Great Job!!! Im in the same situation!!! I cannot get over my ex for anything. I think about him non~stop and its so hard to let go with all that we shared!!! And hopefully soon the both of us with get out of this position! Thank you very much for sharing this!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

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