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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-03-01 10:04 PM



2/26/02

When I call for you, your
At my side
When you see my tears
You say hush sweetie
Don’t cry
When the dreams ate bad
You chase them away
With soothing words
And a smile on your face.

When I’m over the edge
You grip me tight
When you make me smile
I feel so right
When I’m hurting in the heart
You patch it up
When I’m wanting to die
You tell me no that you
Love me so much
My dearest friend don’t
Ever leave my side.

When I fall to the ground
You pick me up
When you hug me tight
I feel so right
When nobody will listen
I know your always
There to listen when nobody will care
When time is to fast
You walk in the room
And everything goes still
Like a painting drawn
My dearest friend don’t
Ever leave my side.

When this love I have
For you is strong
You return your love with
All you believe
When my mind is empty
Your words give me
Wisdom and faith
When the sun is up you
Grab my hand and say
I’m here now forever
Always
My dearest friend don’t
Ever leave my side.

By: AnGz

© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2002-03-01 10:31 PM


Friendship is a beautiful thing
and you expressed it wonderfully

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
2 posted 2002-03-01 11:30 PM


This was really sweet and well written, and you should show it to your friends....


~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

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3 posted 2002-03-02 09:38 AM


Sounds like you have a great friend by your side Your very lucky...i hope you've considered giving this to this person

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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4 posted 2002-03-06 05:20 AM


Having friends like that is the best feeling!!! Sounds like you got someone really special!!! Very good poem!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

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