Teen Poetry #5 |
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Bed of Roses |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Whisper softly, in my ear, hold me close, in your arms, lay me down upon, that bed of roses. Let us dream, those loving dreams, as i watch you sleep, i think, we fit together so perfectly upon, that bed of roses. Every moment we're together, i never want it to end, i feel so drawn to you upon, that bed of roses. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
A bed of roses sounds nice right now.. A great poem and expression of love and how beautiful it can be. Good job.. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I really like this.. |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
I like the rhythm of this poem a lot, although I can't agree with the idea of a bed of roses. (I'm allergic to roses...) I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks all, and i'm sorry 2 hear ur allergic 2 roses ![]() ![]() ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem was well done. Pretty blunt in saying what you like and I enjoyed that. The poem was simply put, and nicely said. Hope to see more. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
lol. Oh well. I'll just substitute in daisies or something. Still a great read, though! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What a beautiful picture you painted..very romantic as well ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
i want a bed of roses!!!! haha lol this was a really good poem..im thinkin u know wuts good for you now, only u can realize that and make ur self a better person emotionally and mentally..love u mon! hope u's stay my happy nbh!! lylan ~Jessibaca ![]() ![]() ![]() ~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this is a really sweet piece! ![]() ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (03-06-2002 05:32 AM).] |
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