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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-28 03:25 PM

No Boundries

I would pave a path of gold for you
   if I knew you'd give me that look,
The one that says, I love you,
   words un-spoken.
And when you're tired,
   you lay your head upon my lap.

I'd dream a thousand dreams
   to make sure you're not awoken.
And when you kiss me without reason,
   or when I don't expect it,
I close my eyes and drift with you
   to save kisses broken.

I would walk forever if I had to,
   just to reach you when you're gone.
No obstacle would hold me back,
   no mountains, rivers, walls.
And when you listen to classic songs with me
   that make you cry,

I will be the shoulder you need,
   the hand to catch you when you fall.
And in every way, to me, you're perfect.
   I'd do anything for you.
Because my love knows no boundries,
   there are no limits at all.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++

enjoy as i did write!

:exorcist:!~Andrea~!:exorcist:

*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-08-28 03:50 PM

very good

very sweet

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-08-28 07:46 PM

very very cute..i liked this one lots thanks A!!

WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHY!?!?!

-beacuse.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2001-08-28 09:30 PM

Extremely sweet! Did you write this about someone? I really liked this love poem!

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

4 posted 2001-08-28 10:22 PM

Yes i did i wrote it about my Hubby .. he is so far away right now!!!

:exorcist:!~Andrea~!:exorcist:

*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-09-01 02:41 PM

Oh, wow! How sweet! *Sniffs* *Stands in the jealous corner*

Loved the last stanza! See! This is exactly what I'm talking about in the "Fall in love" topic in teen chat. This is how love should be. Thinking the other one is perfect, flawless...
You guys have somehting so beautiful...Wow.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-09-04 01:34 PM

I really loved the "kisses broken" part. I thought that was just awesome. Very well written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-09-04 04:35 PM

Wow, this is awesome! It kinda makes we wann get married and everything! Love must truly be a great thing...

Yet again, good job!

There's no point in living, if you can't feel alive!

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