Teen Poetry #5 |
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Band Camp! |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. ![]() |
I risked my life today playing in the rain. See band camp ain't easy, leaves you in lots of pain. Today was the easy practice BOY I don't want to see tomorrow Cuz if this practice was easy I'd don't know what's going to follow. It was sunny and hot and I almost died. Then the dark clouds rolled in and the sky cried and cried. It rained and it poured yet we still marched along! And the band kept going playing that tired old song. Today was the easy practice BOY I don't want to see tomorrow Cuz if this practice was easy I don't know how much more of this I could swallow. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Love the title....did ya see Amer. Pie 2 Anywho, this was really interesting...gives me the feeling there's more going on inside then you're really saying. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it ![]() "Make your life like toiletpaper - long and useful." |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
*Looks behind her to check that no Apple Pies are stalking her* This was pretty cute... sounds like being at bandcamp is more work than fun tho hehehhe ~ali~ Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Must say the title fooled me! I automatically thought it would be goofing American Pie but it seems to be more than that...I liked it ![]() ![]() |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Lol!! So I've heard... ![]() Bel |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
that was good, kinda goofy makin band camp sound like boot camp but it was creative and very good :O) Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wooooooooooooooOOooooooooo!! i loved this piece....you did very well in this one..its cute! *waves at your pic* HIYA!! Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was ok. Not your best, but nonetheless a good poem. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Lol...this is very true. I've got a bunch of friends in band, and all they do is gripe about band practice....rain or sleet or snow or hail, they're always marching. I really liked this poem. -Kosetsu Of all the things that I confess, |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Cool poem. Definately makes band practice sound terrible. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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