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Teen Poetry #5

Three Weeks

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-08-28 09:54 PM

Three weeks -
Three weeks since I've seen him
This is driving me up the wall
Depression - cutting into me
Nothing to do -
Everything needs to be done
No way I can do it all
Three weeks -
Miles away
Distance -
Makes me love him more
No one understands -
I need him
Three weeks -
   Three weeks -
      Three weeks…
Why can't they see?
I need to see him
I need to be held by him -
And him alone
Only he can comfort me
Now - now when I need it most
Three weeks -
   Three weeks -
      Three weeks…
         Three weeks too long…

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-08-28 10:06 PM

This is very good! I guess you love him alot. Hopefully he can come home to you soon.

Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-08-28 11:04 PM

Awww I do understand this one...! But try six months

Good luck to you.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-08-29 10:03 AM

It's definately hard to leave someone you love for a long time. It sucks. I hope he gets back soon. Nice poem Tamma.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

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