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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-08-27 08:42 AM

No one can fill this empty space you left behind
I've got so many words inside
I wanna say to you.
With every step I take
with every beat of my heart I will think of you
and the time we spend together.

It's tearing me apart
it's breaking my heart
that i have to wait so long
to hold you in you arms
to feel you warmth.

Remember when we used to be close all the time
I am drowning from inside
from the tears I cry.
Keep thinking about
that one, that one special that one romantic night
and the love that you and I shared.

It's tearing me apart
it's breaking my heart
that i have to wait so long
to hold you in you arms
to feel you warmth.

I'm crying my heart out while reading your letter
wondering if I should call you, cause
hearing your voice would make it so much better.

It's tearing me,
it's tearing me apart
it's breaking my heart
that i have to wait so long
to hold you in you arms
to feel you warmth.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-08-27 03:08 PM

Wow, that is good. It sounds like a song. Was that what is was supposed to be? Great job!

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

2 posted 2001-08-27 04:35 PM

It DOES sound like a song! Great work on this one...I loved it, and i can relate to where your coming from...if this is a true situation, then I hope things get better for you. Keep writing!

"Make your life like toiletpaper - long and useful."
"When 2+2 is 5 or less, it's time to question common sense."

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-08-27 11:14 PM

So....where's my mp3?

good write from you hullucination!..keep em coming!

Piece you life together and you WILL find holes.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-08-28 12:14 PM

definetly could be a song. very good..i liked how it all fit together. great job

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-08-28 12:47 PM

What more can i say but that i feel your pain...i know exactly what im going through cuz im going through the same thing right now...hell isnt it?? ::hugs::

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

6 posted 2001-08-28 07:57 AM

Thats so sad... i feel so depressed reading all these sad poems

But really good, i agree about the song , And its a really good write hope you work things out!

aLLIE

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-08-28 10:37 AM

Awwww, this is so sad. Why does love have to be complicated? Argg

Very good job at expressing your emotions.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-09-01 03:26 AM

Pretty sad here....I hope things get better for you. A poem enjoyed, and hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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