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| Teen Poetry #5 |
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Falling |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
yes I have been going through a sorta "rough" time but it's ok, we all go through it. Eventually getting over it...I hope to make this my last "sad" post, and I hope you all enjoy Falling: Crazed, demented, talking no sense. I live without existing I breath dead air which surrounds me, Falling into an empty pocket with no end to fall to I just keep falling as it all passes by. Trying to graps an image which slips form my hand Must I go this way forever Or will something eventually break my fall.  I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
emotional insperation, good choice to use to write, good job Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I dont believe I have ever read any of your poetry, but I truly enjoyed this. It was kinda sad, but good all the same. I cant wait to see more! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Oh Heaven's Tears, you should go look his stuff up- You'd enjoy it bunches...Ecspecially the farting smilies. LMAO ANYWAY! Yet again, loved the poem here. Very Nicely done. You expressed yourself well. don't you just hate those damn rough times? Grrr...But Hey- They always make for the best poetry in my opinion. Happy ones are just not realistic. LOL. (Okay, maybe a few...) Anyway, hope to see more...sad, happy...who cares- just more! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
thanx for reading guys I wrote this one a while ago and I've been going through "one of those times" lol Anyways yeah I'm all better, or at least I think I am thanx for reading I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea, "one of those times".....just make sure you keep that head up high and you don't go about putting yourself in lame situations. Well done on the poem jorge and I hope you get happy soon.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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