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Don't play me
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Don't play me |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
Don't play me, love's not a game. I cannot love now, it's just not the same. I've been hurt alot, by so many guys. There's been alot of heartache, and there's been alot of goodbyes. So please don't play me, my love isn't a game. You've hurt me so much, you're just not the same.... stupidity should be painful |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Okay this one confused me a bit. Are you asking a guy who has the prospect of being your lover to not play you? Cause thats what it looks like in the beginning...though at the end it looks as though he has ALREADY played you and you're asking him to stop...Perhaps thats what you were going for though, who knows. I liked it though. Nobody deserves to be played. Thanks for the read.  You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh, I do know this, you've written my heart from years ago. You brought tears to my eyes. Very well expressed. hugs, SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. A pretty straight forward poem. I hope the person doesn't play you at all. Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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