Teen Poetry #5 |
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Come back to me |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Come back to me Your all I need. Without you it doesn’t feel right. Girl how I wish, That you where only a kiss, away So that we could be close, baby together. Miss you so bad, You’re the best I’ve ever had, and I Don’t want to lose you no, baby forever. I can’t eat or sleep When your not by my side And when I close my eyes You are all that I see. Every single day I just lay in my bed Can’t get you outer my head You’re face won’t go away Come back to me Your all I need. Without you it doesn’t feel right. ( 2x ) I pray each night, That you will change your mind, and come Back home where you belong, baby together. Each night I dream, That you are here with me, and that You will never let go, baby forever. I can’t eat or sleep When your not by my side And when I close my eyes You are all that I see. Every single day I just lay in my bed Can’t get you outer my head You’re face won’t go away Come back to me Your all I need. Without you it doesn’t feel right. ( 2x ) When you are not here It’s tearing me apart It’s breaking my heart When ever you’re not near I always used to smile Whenever I woke up But now I don’t have your love You’re always on my mind. Come back to me Your all I need. Without you it doesn’t feel right. ( 2x ) Come back baby Come back ( come back ) Come back baby Come back to me ( 3x ) I can’t eat or sleep When your not by my side And when I close my eyes You are all that I see. Every single day I just lay in my bed Can’t get you outer my head You’re face won’t go away Come back baby Come back ( come back ) Come back baby Come back to me ( 3x ) Come back to me Your all I need. Without you it doesn’t feel right. ( Until fade ) |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was really sad, and filled with emotion. A few spelling/gramatical errors kept throwing me off in my reading though. Other than that, nice job. Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is really sad and filled with emotion.But anyway I loved it and keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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