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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I am invisible. My life has become a listless note. I am anonymous to my friends, to my family, to myself. I live the life of a nobody, my personality - hidden, my heart - kept, but only one person knows my secret, and he keeps it. My life story unwritten, never to be told, forbidden. In love, by secret and in life by another name. Does it make me someone else, or is this one man enough to keep me alive. She gets to live with him, she gets to be his family, she gets to be with him publically. I live in his shadow? So she gets my life. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem was amazing!! The words had such strength to them and i understand where your coming from...i was once in this position and it feels horrible...::hugs::...you expressed your feelings very well though..wonderful job! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow. Very expressive, wonderful write here. You intrigue me more and more everytime you post. The situation here though, pisses me off a bit. I hope you really aren't in this situation. I've beenin a highly similar one- and it's so stupid and degrating to yourself. Think about it. She gets YOUR life? Nope. She gets her own life. He could leave her if he wanted to. He chooses to stay with her though. Move on- You deserve better than being second to another woman. It's just not respectful at all. Anyway though, the poem is the real issue, and like I said- You did a fantastic job on it. I really enjoyed it. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 08-25-2001).] |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Thanks Spice, and I know exactly what you mean this situation is so degrading to women but the poem was not about me. I have never been in this situation I am very much in love at the moment and I intend to keep it that way!! *hugs you!* ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Oh good! Hura! I'm so happy for you. HaHa, and so ya- to show just how happy I am, I'm bumping the poem. LOL You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sad. I hope things get ok with you. I didn't like the way this was going cuz it was just not a good, happy, haha kind of poem. Oh well, we're all sad sometimes and the situation does seem bad.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
She gets to live with him, she gets to be his family, she gets to be with him publically. I live in his shadow? So she gets my life. *shudders*..this hits a bit too close to home kim....im glad its not you you're writing about here. ugh...but yes i agree its a very good write! ............Daffodils |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Kicking Kim~ I am sorry if things are really that way! Well done I liked this alot!  Da kaka be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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