Teen Poetry #5 |
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Music is my Escape |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC ![]() |
OK, this isn't my best work. It is intended to be a song in the future. Probably punk. Have Fun I suffered through another un-perfect day Now I need some music to take the pain away I’m so sick of these feelings inside of me So I go to the record store and buy the new CD I pop it in the stereo and wait for the sound Can’t stand anticipation, my heart begins to pound The sound hits the airwaves and I know all is right I depend on the music as it carries me through the night It helps me when no one’s there It takes away all my cares It mends my heart when there’s a tear And relieves the pain I cannot bear My music is my escape My music is my escape Turning on the radio I don’t have no place else to go Call the DJ to play my favorite song I sit and wait as the night drags on Time moves slow when you’re all alone It’s been so long since I picked up that phone Feel the beat playing in my soul When I’m feeling empty music fills the hole DJ plays the song and I know it’s for me When the music’s playing is the only time I’m free It helps me when no one’s there It takes away all my cares It mends my heart when there’s a tear And relieves the pain I cannot bear My music is my escape My music is my escape I can’t stand the silence All it brings is pain I can’t close my eyelids My thoughts drive me insane There must me something else That can clear my mind Every time I go searching But music is all I find Cause my music is my escape My music is my escape Music is my escape "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jon, ![]() huge grins here, I love this. I can hear it as a song, I don't know about punk though LOL have you a certain sound in mind ( a group to give me an idea of the feel?)I am keeping this one. ![]() ![]() |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Thanks SEA. The sound I had in mind is from the band The Bouncing Souls. Calm, happy sounding punk. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Hey man, I totaly agree, music is MY escape from life when it starts sucking, too. I have a song for evey occasion it seems. I do the same thing, at times. And I don't see how this is bad, I see no problem, it's just a little different. I hope to read more! Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jon, I have no idea who that is LOL I bet it's good though, it sounds like a soothing song, nothing screaming like NIN, I like it at any rate ![]() "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Jon~(hey thats my Dad's name!) I liked this alot! I am surprised that the speakers to my radio are not broke! As a matter of fact my sterio is blarring now. Janet Jackson of course!! LOL I liked this alot!! ![]() Da kaka be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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