Teen Poetry #5 |
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your shadow |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV ![]() |
your shadow i can see. but i do not see you. is it all in my mind. or are you still there? i thought you left me. but then why do i see your shadow? it is all alone. where have you gone. why is your shadow with me and not with you? am i dreaming still? or is this real? come back and get your shadow and LEAVE ME BE!! robin ok i have no clue where this came from but i just wrote it out of the blue. ![]() meet my cat his name is fred! i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is cool! I think u should analyze this or something. Maybe it means something, lol. Anyhow, whether it means stuff or not, I like it a lot. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
MY shadow, you say... You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
"come back and get your shadow" loved that! very very effective The whole poem was really quite nice.. i know how you feel its not a good feeling anyway! G'work ALLIE |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
My shadow? Well hey, give it back! Nice poem...enjoyed! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You sure you want him to take it back, or are you the one clinging on to it ![]() Thanks for the great read keep it up and keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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