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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-08-24 02:23 AM

your shadow i can see.
but i do not see you.
is it all in my mind.
or are you still there?
i thought you left me.
but then why do i see your shadow?
it is all alone.
where have you gone.
why is your shadow with me and not with you?
am i dreaming still?
or is this real?
come back and get your shadow and
LEAVE ME BE!!

robin
ok i have no clue where this came from but i just wrote it out of the blue.

meet my cat his name is fred!

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

1 posted 2001-08-24 02:50 AM

This is cool! I think u should analyze this or something. Maybe it means something, lol. Anyhow, whether it means stuff or not, I like it a lot.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-08-24 03:16 AM

MY shadow, you say...

You eat the brains of an old, wise man.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

3 posted 2001-08-24 04:40 AM

"come back and get your shadow"
loved that! very very effective
The whole poem was really quite nice.. i know how you feel its not a good feeling anyway!

G'work

ALLIE

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-27 11:52 AM

My shadow? Well hey, give it back!

Nice poem...enjoyed!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-09-05 08:15 PM

You sure you want him to take it back, or are you the one clinging on to it

Thanks for the great read
keep it up and keep sharing

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