Teen Poetry #5 |
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Dedicated to the Dreamers |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Once upon a window sill I sat upon a star I gazed beyond the universe And travelled near and far. I danced upon the cotton clouds And raced the wind to Rome. I laughed out loud with silver bells At statues made of stone. I went to Saturn then to Mars To capture fireflies. I rode upon an Oliphaunt And argued with the wise. I flew to Never Neverland And sailed seven seas I landed on a flower's stem And hummed the song of bees. I blasted off on rocketships And vanished out of sight I tripped the light of fire flames That flickered in the night. I rode upon an angel's wings And danced across the sea I jumped up high to touch the sky Where no one could catch me. I fought a dragon huge and fierce With my sword and sheild. I learned of charms by Merlin's books Where every spell's revealed. I rode upon a speeding train That passed a blurry man I tossed my coat and hat to fly With Super Duper man! To live in worlds from my own mind Would be hopeless it seems. I sighed a sigh and went to sleep... Besides, they're only dreams... ===== As the title says, I dedicate this to all the dreamers. Wrote this at 1am...hehe. It somehow popped into my head... ![]() ![]() Much love, Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is very well written even if you wrote it at 1 am. But anyway keep up the awsome wrok. Lauren |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, This poem was awesome!! I really liked it.. my favorite thing to do is dream.. haha funny but hey it's so relaxing... well sumtimes that is!!! Thanks for the read I liked it a lot!!! Always, amanda ![]() If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
I agree, this really was awesome. The rhyming seemed flawless at times, and I can proudly say I smiled at this poem. Insomnia might be a good thing for you. Once again great job Leah. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
That was an Awsome poem!! thank you for the reply on my "gone" the poem that is .. Andrea *You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
This one was really cool. The way you talked about different dreams... Awesome poem! Good job! - Cody - |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"I flew to Never Neverland And sailed seven seas I landed on a flower's stem And hummed the song of bees." I LOVED that stanza. This poem's awesome.. the ending hit me hard. That last line really hit home. Awesome work, Leah. This is another wonderful poem. Dreams are the best.. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OMG! I LOVED this one!!! INto the library. It's too charming for words! WOW! HeHeHe...Made em smile the WHOLE TIME!IT had a wonderful flow, rhythm....AWESOME! Can I touch you? HAHAHAHAHA You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
absolutely wonderful piece here! ![]() ![]() Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, this was a very magical piece for me. I really liked this one. Awesome job. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopey stole the word I was gonna use ![]() I'll say it anyways MAGICAL definitely brought me to dreamworld *standing ovation* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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