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Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-04-04 12:57 PM

why does life have to be so hawd
why do laddies breake my hawt?
that one thing i don't undastan
i try so very hawd to be a man.
but i don't i try hawd enough
every time i show my love.
but now it's time to cry
soona or latta i'm gonna say good bey.
that is how much i am hurt
wrigh now i have a little tear drop in my eyes burn.
i wanna learn how to love again
becawz wrigh now i don't know how to begin.
please some one help me
to be open an how to be free.
i want love back into my hawt
wrigh now it's broken apawt.
please some one i need some help
cawz wrigh now i have nuthin left.
i'm just waittin for that wrigh time
wrigh now i do wanna cry.
i'm more of a man if i do
but i would feel betta if i say i love you.
but t hat wrigh now i don't know how
i'm just waittin to be undagroun.
now it's time to be open
i wanna fawl into love in the blue ocean.
please some one give me assistance
i wanna prove i have romance.
will that special some one give me a chance
i would like my hawt to glow with glance.
now it's time to the end
i need time to think with a friend

                     from kevin reid
                       aka dunphy
                     18 M Mass.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2002-04-05 12:50 PM

Kevin-
This is such an emotional and heartfelt plea.

"i wanna prove i have romance."

I think you've just proven that with this write.
Someday, the right girl will come along and
appreciate all that you are.
Excellent job of expressing these feelings.
Keep up the writing.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-05-2002 12:50 AM).]

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-04-05 11:40 AM

thank you for replying.
but write now i don't think no love will enter. ,y soul has returned back into the darkness. it will take a long time to enter the light. love hurts in so many ways you know. so many times i have been hurt. why me i ask. is their a god? is their such thing as love? is their life? i don't know any more
it's hard to answer.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-05 05:47 PM

I definately think you've proven a lot with the poem itself like vicky said. It was a very heartfelt and emotional piece. You wrote it wonderfully. You can love and you will love...just give everything time.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2002-04-05 08:25 PM

omg i so know what you are talking about hun i mean love knows no boundries and we get hurt it don't care sometimes. all the times i been hurt i can't even count on one hand but i know the feeling you are talking about hun. i just wish i knew how to love and be loved.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-04-05 09:53 PM

The essense of the poem is very honest.
I hope things get better for you soon.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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