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Teen Poetry #5

Plagued

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

0 posted 2002-04-05 05:22 AM

Another depressive poem, the only poems I seem to be able to write at the moment. Im hope happiness will come soon!!

My body is overwhelmed by the pain
Past, present and future spinning through my brain
All the love I still feel is so hard to contain
Because it is overtaken by the pain.
He says he won’t hurt me
But his spirit wont leave me be
And every time I think of him
The ache in my heart will begin
The crack in my soul
The need to be whole
Searching for the missing part
That will heal my aching heart.

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2002-04-05 05:32 AM

See me?-
A sad write, indeed. You've expressed the
painful emotions very well.
Keep your chin up, and look for the happy
things in life...eventually, you'll find
your smile again.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

2 posted 2002-04-05 03:46 PM

That was a good poem. Although, I'm not a big fan of rhyming poems, but you carried it out nicely. Feel Better

*Erica*

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-05 05:50 PM

I hope that you'll ve able to find that missing part very soon...Great write. ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-04-05 07:31 PM

You've captured your emotions very well in this piece See Me ... well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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