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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
The music can’t get loud enough, Pounding hard against my brain, Crush the stress under the force, Pounding hard to quell the pain. Screaming along to the words, But screaming out of tune, I’m falling down on weakening knees, And screaming at the moon. Laughing like a madman, I’m shouting against the pain, The music can’t get loud enough, Pounding hard against my brain. "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... this was awesome. The rhyme really made the poem better, something I find a lot of people can't do. I don't even try... lol. Again, great poem. Talk to you later. Kielo |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow Adam, another great write...can I borrow your muse???? PLEASE Sometimes i wonder why the lyrics of music mean so much to me...and then I look at it as poetry put to a beat, and I see that music is a large part of my life.. Great Write.. ~Lisa |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
This was another of my quicky poems...which is defined as a poem that just pops into mind and I type down....no editing and such. I wanna eventually put my poems to music...at least some of them. Sometimes those make the best songs. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Laughing like a madman, I’m shouting against the pain, The music can’t get loud enough, Pounding hard against my brain Adam, you are a genius! Wanna do a collab? I am a geek!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
STrong piece!! Wow hun...really nice job on this one! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Like everyone else I enjoyed it  you always seem to put force behind your words even if they be short and quick, but nonetheless I adored it Kristen |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*me likes* its like going to a really loud concert and hearing your favourite song play- it moves you to no ends.. loved this adamz...keep writing buddy and someday we'll put music to your wonderful words  My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
HEHE I love love love this. When my parents used to make me mad... I'd go in my room and blare my stereo...it just makes you FEEL better. But sometimes...it's still not enough...just not loud enough, and not quite effective. Arg... I feel ya on this one. Very well written Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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