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sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

0 posted 2002-04-04 12:13 PM

one day you will learn to let go
of all the mishaps which caused those tears to fall
of all the times death seemed not to far
of all the feelings crammed somewhere deep
and all the ghosts that haunt just beneath the surface

one day you will see
that smiles tend to burn more calories than frowns
that each sunrise brings with it a new begining
that expressing yourself is a necessity
and someone,somewhere will find you perfect

just keep in mind
that you cannot alter the memories of your past
but only work to better the things that will come
and that every rainbow is always worth chasing
and every shooting star is worth a wish

laconic
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 64
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-04-04 07:13 AM

very "get off ur ass and stop feeling sorry"...although u probably have a deeper more meaningful meaning that i cant put into words.
Nice write, keep it up.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-04-05 12:45 PM

sorrowfulangel-
YES!!! This is excellent!

"one day you will see
that smiles tend to burn more calories than frowns
that each sunrise brings with it a new begining
that expressing yourself is a necessity
and someone,somewhere will find you perfect"

I absolutely LOVE the positive attitude in those lines!
Extremely well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

3 posted 2002-04-06 08:25 PM

that was a quick thought?? lol. it's nice, and gives the lazy person something to think about. lol. nice write

*Erica*

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2002-04-08 07:06 PM

Wow, I want my mom to read this. lol Hell, I know a lot of people that need to read this. I like this a lot. It has a great (and true) message.

Thanks for posting!

DE

"I never claimed to be your savior
I said I had a dirty mouth
Stop analyzing my behavior
If you’re too dumb to work it out"
Garbage

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-04-08 07:55 PM

Pukka write.

A very true and important message so too often no one gets. Why live in the past? Work on the future.

"that expressing yourself is a necessity
and someone,somewhere will find you perfect"

So sweet! I love it!

The expressing yourself bit... so so true! I do it in a miriad of ways.... if you cannot express yourself... the is it not all locked inside?

"that you cannot alter the memories of your past
but only work to better the things that will come"

*nods*

~ Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

AliveAgain
New Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 9
In the clouds

6 posted 2002-04-08 08:54 PM

this was wonderful and made me feel so much better. great write. i hope to see many more.

~R*

If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead and rotten, write something worth reading or do something worth writing.
-Ben Franklin

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-04-09 11:06 AM

Yes u are very right...one day....Time will tell. Great job on the poem

Thanks for sharing!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

8 posted 2002-04-10 11:39 AM

i only hope that the someday you speak of comes soon!! i really enjoyed this poem, it really made me realize that SOMEDAY everything will be okay..someday.

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