Teen Poetry #5 |
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True Love |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
When the lights go out at night, Everything seems so far from sight. Hoping to catch a glimpse of you in my dreams, Walking under the stars next to the streams. Love guided by moonlight, Wishing I could hold you tight. It's you I want to spoil, When it all starts to uncoil. It'll be just you and me, Walking happily holding hands by the endless sea. Stars reflecting the light against the waves, My heart pounding for love it enslaves. Longing for the gentle touch of your hand, Alone on the balcony I now stand. Waiting for the day you come back, One more day I think I can hack. Smiling as I see youre prety smile, The wait was worth all the while Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
That poem is truely beautiful it sound like your heart is really longing for someone special. I can totally relate to your words. It is exectly how I feel. Hope you find a true pair o doves. Sam |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Kyle- This was beautifully done. I really enjoyed reading every word of it. I know how ya feel here...and I hope it was worth waiting. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
this was very sweet....i liked it a lot ![]() You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
*sniff* That was Beuatiful man. I hear what u are saying. Ahh, love is a beuatiful thing...... Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this one... I liked the images you portrayed here. "Longing for the gentle touch of your hand, Alone on the balcony I now stand." Nicely done. I hope to see more from you soon! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
t'll be just you and me, Walking happily holding hands by the endless sea. this is really sweet kyle...i enjoyed this poem bunches..its really sweet...beautiful words! ![]() ![]() ![]() "Kiss my Starfish! |
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