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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
To my Angel, I am not copying, it is truth which we see to my simple Love we will be I sit where with thought under this brilliant blue sky when will we be together when will we lie holding eachother in our sensual naked arms on a beautiful soft cloud we could be so bound only time well heal our deepest cuts only another could keep us any apart in my heart I feel we will be again because we are Amaranth forever meant to be like the earth meets the air or the sun touches the sea it is purely natural our hearts will simply be only when I am myself you will again come and when you do we will simply be one Love from Sam |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a nice one. I hope you gave it to the person it was written for, I'm sure they would've loved it. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
that was really sweet sam, and whoever you wrote that for is really lucky.  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
wow..that was so sweet! and really really really did i say really? good...very nice and sweet i loved this part.... meant to be like the earth meets the air or the sun touches the sea it is purely natural our hearts will simply be great job! You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is really nice. Seeings how I have only read a handful of your pieces posted, this one is somewhat better than the rest. I hope to see more and to see you replying tons.  ~AF~ I'm a little teapot, short and stout! Here is my handle, here is my spout. *toot toot* |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww... This is sweet. I hope that everything works out for you! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Yes, this is very sweet...I do believe it's the second poem form you that had the word "Amaranth" in it...HeHe...Newly discovered word- perhaps? ANyway- I like this alot. I thought you did a spectacular job on this one! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Thankyou all for your lovely comments. I just hope she thinks the same as you. Amaranth, yeah new word, it's pretty cool though, never-ending and stuff. Sam |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"I am not copying, it is truth which we see to my simple Love we will be" The beginning paved the way for a wonderful poem. Need I say more? Very nice work, Sam. I REALLY enjoyed this one. One of my favs of the few I've read from you. Hope to see more soon! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwww this is really nice...i liked it a lot..thanks for sharing brizzy boy! "Kiss my Starfish! |
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