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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-08-17 08:12 PM


i have an illness.
it has me gropped tightly in it's arms.
i know it will not let go.
i have an illness

i have an illnees that is quite fierce.
it has all power over me.
i cannot get release from it.
i have an ilness.

i have an illness.
it will not let me breathe.
it will not let go of my life,
i have an illness

i have an illness.
and soon it will be gone.


robin


ok ppls i needed to let my feelings out in a poem. because this is how i'm feeling bout my illness so please i don't want anybosy getting sad or feelinfg sorry for me. it jsut needed to come out.


i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 08-17-2001).]

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DarkAngelOfTheStars
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1 posted 2001-08-17 08:17 PM


well its good to get your feelings out. Im sure everything will work out ok and it will be all better again   if you ever need to talk you can email me or something.

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2 posted 2001-08-17 08:59 PM


Maybe I should haev gotten this from reading the poem... but...what..kind...of illness..if I may ask?
Good poem, keep your head up
Bel

"And you're my obsession
I love you to the bones
And Ana wrecks your life
Like an anorexia life"
- "Ana's Song", Silverchair
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3 posted 2001-08-17 10:07 PM


Lol I was thinking just what Isabel said but I'm glad she said it first, hehehe. Well whatever your troubles may be keep your head up and keep writin always, good post!

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4 posted 2001-08-18 01:05 AM


maybe i should of included that huh? well it's kidney failure. ESRD which means end stage renal diease.

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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5 posted 2001-08-20 11:35 PM


Wow.. that's a really tough disease.  Sorry taht you're going through all this.  I liked those last two lines...
"i have an illness.
and soon it will be gone."
That's good that it will soon be gone.  I hope treatment goes well.  Good luck!

--Marie

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6 posted 2001-08-21 12:39 PM


i have an illness.
                         and soon it will be gone.

i ADMIRE your STRENGTH robin.....keep it in there hunny and dont let go!!..you ROCK!

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My chocolate Starfish punk!"
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7 posted 2001-08-21 12:55 PM


*blows kisses to all* tks for the support! that's what i need right now. but soon i will be gettin a transplant if everything goes well.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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