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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
I have no story to tell, or any lessons to be told, the knowledge i have, is only 19 years old, I made my mistakes, just to make them again, I yell at little children, and argue among friends, I question the world, people question me, I'm on the edge of my set, between sane and insanity, the love of my life, won't love me back, the heart that she's broken, has turned space black, the smile on my face, has turned upside down, the world I live in, is running me around, I finally see now, what choices I need to make instead, my teen years are over now, only my adult years ahead. last poem from me, but i'll still check out other posts.. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Sad to see ya go. This was a nice send off and gave a reason to why you were leaving. Good luck with adultness "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
everyone is leaving....alright well good luck, i hope one day youll come back. Regina |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this tore at my heart. I hope you are ok. If you ever want to talk, just email me ok? and I hope you do post more  |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is totally my life!Good poem. Sucks to see you go. To hell with becoming an adult. I'm 19 too, but I only act like an adult when I have to. If you act like an adult all the time you can never have the fun that a teen can have.To me Adult=old,work,bills,no fun,complacent. I will never let all of these things happen. Good luck in your future adultness Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Sad to see you go. I hope you reconsider, or at least grace us with a post now and then for "old time's sake." Depressing times, to me, always bring out the best in poetry. HeHe- I wish I could see more of your work right now...cause this is awesome. I hate to see ya go. You be a good lil Devil. Thanks for the read. You showed your feelings very well. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
ya shouldnt go brah, youre a good poet you should stay and write some more Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Sad to see some more people leave. This poem I really liked. Great flow throughout and lines that can be applied to everyone. I yell at little children too...but that's a type of therapy so we're allowed to do that.  I hope you stop by every now and then and give us a wave.  <--- Wave ~AF~ I'm a little teapot, short and stout! Here is my handle, here is my spout. *toot toot* |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
awsome work chas, take care buddy |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok i got to tie you down to a chair now! no leaving while robin is here! *ties you to a chair* ok now you stay right there! oh btw awsome poem. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
hey, thanks to all that had replied.. it means alot to me.. thanks again.. ......chas.... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's sad to see yet another go... and especially a good poet like yourself. I hope you pop in every once in a while just to say hello. I would like for you to stay, but I understand the need for time away from PIP. I think everyone's getting to that point right now. I enjoyed this poem.. It's one of my favs by you. The motions run deep. Like I said, hope you stop by every now and then. Bye bye.--Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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