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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-02-27 08:39 PM



Somebody help me,
I think I’m gonna hurt myself.
I’m falling for this one guy,
And he’s a hazard to my health.

We’re so much alike,
And he’s so sweet.
When he’s around, sparks fly,
And I just love the heat.


I just soak it all up,
Like a hot bubble bath.
This relationship looks good,
And I hope it’s the right path.

I’m a full blooded woman,
I need love and attention.
And baby, between us,
There is no hateful tension.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2002-02-28 01:39 AM


Spine~
Guys like or that make you feel like this are to good to be true! But good luck!!! Good poem too!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2002-02-28 04:00 AM


cute...very cute and flirty...me enjoyed much

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2002-03-01 08:14 PM


hey this is a really good poem! dave..well hes juss a mofo! hahaha jk hes really kewl and hes the best thing that ever happened to you and u know it! he really likes u dont worry..i know these things ok well keep writing! lylan ~Jess

~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
4 posted 2002-03-01 08:15 PM


hey this is a really good poem! dave..well hes juss a mofo! hahaha jk hes really kewl and hes the best thing that ever happened to you and u know it! he really likes u dont worry..i know these things ok well keep writing! lylan ~Jess

~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2002-03-02 04:17 PM


Mmmmm This guy sounds very nice!!! Hope everything works out for you....

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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Winnipeg
6 posted 2002-03-02 07:06 PM


Heh-heh...nothing's wrong with desire! "No-one ever died from wanting too much"

Well written!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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