A victim of your own demise

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Teen Poetry #5

A victim of your own demise

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-03-02 02:48 PM

This girl I know has so many problems, and i always try to make them better, but the truth is, she sets herself up for the fall so she can get the sympathy and the pity. She's always so full of "hurt" she doesnt see me, and whats going on in my life, she doesnt realize the things she says hit me like a bullet to the heart. She doesnt get that she soaks up all the comfort leaving me in the dark....

Im tired of your casual lies
You think that you are the victim
But you cause your own demise
When you refuse to listen
I'm tired of you maliscious tears
For you know they are a ploy
I've dealt with them too many years
To realize you were coy
Its not that Im not always here
Im sorry for your hurt and pain
What's said in your hurtful tears
Are not true sorrow, but in vain
We all need eachother now
But you use me for attention
And my needing you isnt allowed
Its lost in your pretention

~LCBS

[This message has been edited by LCBS (03-03-2002 12:07 PM).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-03-02 04:18 PM

OOoooo i cant stand people like that!!! SOmetimes people can be so self-involved u just wanna smack them silly!! You put your emotions in here well..i really enjoyed it!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-03-02 07:03 PM

Wow...I liked this! It was too the point...yet not like a jagged knife.

I think that if you don't want the hurt anymore, but still herlp the person...the best thing would be to---tell them! Tell them that you care enough to listen...but are hurt by what they say. Sometimes it takes a good push for some to open their eyes...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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