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A lover'sBliss
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A lover'sBliss |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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A LOVER'S BLISS Ancient emotions ignite flames of the lovers cores have their hands been upon anothers hips? Gazing into each others eyes searching for love already knowing the lusty feelings it's time for love Clothed in the purest white yet enticing his blue eyes devour her body In this state of nothingness all that once was is now vanished within her deep passion bouncy lovers pass their lives to each other rendering complete trust at the cavern's mouth is where they proove their love already loyalty of soul Perhaps in this world of mine out in the sun the world seems so alive although in their hearts they know the fate to come certain darkness invades a cloudless day chance, luck, romance the perfect picture of serenity! The calm exterior proves to be a far greater mask than indifference one,two, three BOOM! The lovers reach their final destination the final kiss the last embrace the finalee of their intimacy. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
The lovers reach their final destination wow ....this is great! i enjoyed the reading of it quite a bit! you did very well on this one regi...thanks for sharing..  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very good, Regi. The ending was very powerful.. My favorite lines were :it's time for love/Clothed in the purest white/yet enticing. The way you said love was clothed in the purest white was awesome. nice work! You're a talented poet.. I hope to read more soon. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is a great poem keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful...great poem...well done!...bye Ina.  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Tres bien fait, Regina. This has a very classic poetic sense to it. I hope to read more! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ina, your free verse is just amazing. Someone said to me a while ago that you are the Queen of freeverse and yes, you deserve that title.  Your last few lines were fantastic. Once again you have given us a poem that exceeds all expectations. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
once again good stuff I liked it a lot I really like the way you right it's a lot different than most peoples style and it rocks I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
cool...good free flowing verse |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not your best Regi, but nonetheless a good poem by you. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love this poem Ina I just simply love it ~*applauds*~ you have become outstanding poet keep it up hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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