Teen Poetry #5 |
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Boy No Longer Lonely (2nd and probably last of the 'series') |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
BOY NO LONGER LONELY As he held the knife He thought just one last time Did anybody care for him? He didn't feel worth a dime He held up the knife To his pounding chest Then he got one last idea A black book; his final guess He began to read Of the friend God can be Right then, right there He dropped down to his knees He discovered the love of God And though noone seemed to care He knew down in his heart That God will be there He threw the knife Onto the hardwood counter His suicidal thoughts dissappeared After his God encounter Through accepting God He had one friend The friend that never leaves A true friend until the end - Cody - |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a poem! I loved the message. Great job here Cody. I found this to be inspiring. Well said. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Ah what a twist from your last where you said he did commit suicide. I really like this ending better. Thanks for sharing! Until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow! I wasn't expecting that to happen... this one is awesome! Very powerful message. I really connected with this one. Hit home... Nicely done, Cody... VERY well written poem you have here. I encourage you to add more to the series... I'm curious to know what happens next ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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