Teen Poetry #5 |
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A Ball of Yarn |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
This morning, my cat unraveled a ball of yarn As I picked it up, I realized I am like that ball of yarn You have to unravel me to find the good From the outside I appear to be heartless But that’s only because no one’s ever unraveled me From the secrets my heart holds My journal is the only thing I turn to That won’t laugh at my mistakes You gotta take my string And unravel me from my secrets I’m a ball of yarn But one ones unraveled me My heart is where the ball begins Then it wraps around Until it’s visible to the outside I’m not asking for much . . . Just for someone to unravel me. "A friend's shoulder makes a |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
WOW: My heart is where the ball begins I really enjoyed the whole comparisson through out the poem... Very very good post ALLIE |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Very interesting, in the beginning it was like a story that turned into a poem. The poem itself unraveled like a ball of yarn. Thanks for sharing. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem here....a bit of deepness and I liked it! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Wow..this was great. I loved the comparison to the ball of yarn..very insightful. Thanks for sharing! ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice analogy... I really like the way you encompassed yourself with a ball of yarn. Interesting read... Thanks for sharing. I liked this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
As with all your poems Tamma, this was a brilliant read and you describe things so well!! What can I say?...Amazing! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ ![]() "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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