Heartache In Your Absence.

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Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-08-08 02:53 PM

There's pain in my chest.
Lonely nights alone,
take their toll
on my unbroken heart,
as my tolerance begins to decay.
The nucleus,
the mind of my body
slowly turns away from me.
Failing to make a decision.
The lack of your love
indents my weary heart
slowly piercing a hole,
in such a worthy place.
Tolerating your absence,
causing my dreams to subside
setting the Sun
on this heartbreaking soul.

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-08-08 02:57 PM

Wonderful job! I would have to say that this is one of my favorite from you. Great job!

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-08-08 03:14 PM

Great poem I really enjoyed it keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Delirious_Smurf
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since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

3 posted 2001-08-08 03:28 PM

I liked that so very much.
You can deffinitely understand that certain pain through this poem.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-08-08 03:32 PM

"The lack of your love
indents my weary heart
slowly piercing a hole,
in such a worthy place."
Wow Kim! Definetly one of my favorites of your pieces. This was excellent. Your emotions came shining through. Great job!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-08-08 05:25 PM

I liked this one. Thought you did a really good job on it Kim!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-08 09:44 PM

"Tolerating your absence,
causing my dreams to subside
setting the Sun
on this heartbreaking soul."

That's so well written! I really enjoyed this. Wonderful work, Kim!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-08-09 02:00 AM

oh wow wonderful piece!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

sean mani
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since 2001-08-06

Posts 27

8 posted 2001-08-09 02:16 AM

u know something...i have felt exactly the way you have felt many a night...some nights the pain was just too much to bear...some times i just felt like endin all of this in an undescribable way...your poem and me share many things in common...great writer u are...

sean

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

9 posted 2001-08-09 08:43 AM

i really liked this a lot, i could relate. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2001-08-10 08:29 AM

Very well done here. Excellent showing of your emotions...!

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

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