Teen Poetry #5 |
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Dark Materials #4: Visions (second last one) |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Visions Falling into darkness amidst a world of gray Tainted shadows blend with the air upon the graves Ravens take to sky and follow empty souls And fires fill the darkened world with smoke as black as coal. Stifled breaths of windy air upon the lips of one Breathing was a harsher thing since the fading of the sun Cherry cheeks began to flood the faces of the men And never had they thought that their life was at an end. Songs and birds have taken flight to the whisper of the wind Tickled ears and vacant eyes are filled with wonders of the sinned Boney hands of chalky white reach out to take a life And winter comes and chills the hearts and thrusts its stony knife. Golden, garnished stars hang from the spaceless sky above Children born are raging full of evil from no love Sunlight banished from the fall of this forsaken universe The night sings a frigid song, a song of bloody thurst. Seams that bind the sky above have broken into threads And falls upon the pillows that lay upon our beds For all these visions are but softly laden dreams Yet somehow in my darkened mind...that's not what it may seem... ===== Ok, I know I said I'd go, but my muse came back...so I'm here for a while longer. This one just came out of nowhere, so here you are...#4! I believe there may be one last one to the series...until then, hola, I'm back! And to all those who've replied to the series and my other poems, thank you. You have no idea how encouraged I am by you all...Thank you. ![]() -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 08-07-2001).] |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is wonderful work I am glad you "muse" came back ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
The imagery is awesome in this. I loved it. And welcome back ![]() |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
![]() ![]() ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
WOW! i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done here Leah. Another poem well received. More!! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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