Teen Poetry #5 |
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I want my heart back......(not finished yet...work in progress! :) |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
So many lies keep coming my way I keep geting lied to from day to day My heart is fragile,but yet you didn't care All of this anger makes me frustrated, it's just not fair You told me things,That I belived My trust you shatterd,my heart is decived Deception is hard to face,it's hard to relize You told me many things, but they were all lies how could you kiss me and look in my eyes another guy has played me, once again I can't take these games of saying,"I love you" if its just pretend! Can't you see what you did riped me apart I can't take your games, and what you do to my heart Inside me a feeling I hate to feel I want to awake from this nightmare, please dont be real Lies upon deception is all that runs through my mind How could I have been so blind? How can this world be so unkind? I gave you my heart along with my soul You took them without thinking, both you stole I feel as though my insides are broken My heart cannot mend,because of the harsh words spoken I devoted myself intirely to you But you took my heart,broke it right into two I know I wouldn't do anything to bring you such pain All these feelings inside they wont go away, they still remain I asked you to tell me what's goin on? How could you continue lieing for so long? How could you think it's all fine? I want my heart back, you stole it, it's mine You tell me you love me and only me You broke my heart,now how can this be? I imaganied our future, and how it would turn out Why did you say,"I love you." if you had a doubt But still you went on lieing to your self how could you say I love you and not anyone else? I knew when I told you my 3 words of trust It was all clear, it was love, not lust Don't play with my heart, like it's a toy but then I forget you are just a boy. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Oooo! I liked this one. I loved these lines: "My trust you shatterd,my heart is decived Deception is hard to face,it's hard to relize You told me many things, but they were all lies how could you kiss me and look in my eyes" The last line was cool too. Had some attitude. I liked it. Very well done. ![]() You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked the last line. It showed that you weren't going to give in to his foolish games. You go, girl! I really enjoyed this one... I can't wait to see the finished product ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
OH OH OH I LOVED THE LAST LINE! BOYS ARE SOOOOO UGH! THEY DON'T KNOW WHEN TO QUIT! I SHOULD TALK LOL! BUT IT WAS A GOOD READ. ROBIN i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. Not all guys are like that, but oh well. You wrote this well. I liked the tone you wrote in too. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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