Teen Poetry #5 |
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I love You ... Repost from open poetry 3...yeah ive been here that long :) |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa ![]() |
The words repeated in my head I had been practicing for days And yet these words could not be said Lost among my hearts delays The silence fell on both our ears Why did you still seem so content Struggling just to face my fears It seemed like hours came and went When somehow in your gazing eyes Amiss my most unveiling hour I felt an inner passion rise And granted on myself the power To tell you everything I felt You smiled at me and brought me near I kissed your lips and felt mine melt As you whispered in my ear Your softly spoken loving words Were the sweetest sounding ever said And ever since the day I heard Your words repeated in my head I love you |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This is really sweet. I hope you gave it to whoever you wrote it for. Thanks for reposting it. ![]() |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is really sweet and whoever you wrote this for is really lucky.SO keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Kev... I really liked this one. The flow and rhyme was perfect... and the content was awesome. Sometimes it's so hard to say those three words, especially when you mean it the most. Nicely done! I really enjoyed it ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow you have been here a long time~I thought I had but you put me to shame ![]() ![]() *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great! Very nice job Kevin... ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
AWWWWWW THIS REMINDS ME OF A POEM I WROTE. ROBIN i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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