Teen Poetry #5 |
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Those three words |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time ![]() |
It almost slipped a couple times Three words I almost said. My heart and mouth were screaming YES! But NO!! reverbed inside my head. Feelings felt but never spoken It pains me not to say Those three words I wanted to Just the other day. this isn't one of my best poems...it was more or less a poem i wrote b/c i needed to get it out..and writing it down was much more preferable than talking to the people that were around at the time. The reason i'm posting it is b/c i wanted to show that there's more than the overly depressing crap i write more often than not... ![]() " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a very good poem!! And I know what you mean!! I really liked it too cuz thats the way I always write my poems... I just have tons of feelings stored up inside.. so I just write them down... But I liked this very much.. Hope to see more soon. Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Always feels better after you write about it, huh? ![]() I enjoyed this piece. It's a nice vent ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I would have to agree with Marie. I used to hold in how I feel about people..then I lost someone without ever telling them how much they honestly touched my life and I still regret it. Love is a beautiful thing...spread it around!! ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i realte...but, its like something holds you back...and the words doesnt seem to come out...i feel this one. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-05-2001).] |
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Postman Pat Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 23The Great Land DownUnder |
Trust me. I feel like this EVERY day. Sometimes you know in your heart that you are in love with a person but you also know that telling that person the way you feel would do you wrong. I liked the poem. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
HeHeHe- It's okay! We won't strap you in the Psycho 2000 because you wrote a happy poem. ![]() I actually liked it. For some reason I always read your poems in a fast, low tone. It gives it a really nice flow. Anyway- ya, I know what ya mean here. Had those thoughts before. Nice write. ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here. It's always good to express yourself. Vent yourself......yep yep. Anyhow, well done on this. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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