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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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you show off for me you with your cute smile those eyes that haunt me as I walk away you run further and further in the opposite direction wondering if I'll follow you with your messy hair your amp that keeps you balanced that electric guitar in your hand you play practice the same thing over and over an over again you show off for me you open my locker you get my books you let me laugh at you you smile and shrug and provide me with backround music for this movie I call my life Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Allysa- I absolutely LOVE this!  This is VERY well written, and the picture it creates, in my mind, makes me smile. Excellent! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
EXCELLENT! I like that poem. a lot. a lot of imagery. nice job! *Erica* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great job!!! Sounds like u got an amazing guy allysa... Very cute poemiTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"you smile and shrug and provide me with backround music for this movie I call my life" This does make me smile. Much enjoyed. A very lovely job here... ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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