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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-08-03 11:56 PM


ok jeff this poem is poem is for you.

you wrote the words i could never say to him.
so i told him through a poem.
you showed me how it was done through your work.

now i will show you,
how it's done through mine.
it may not not seem full of love.
but love it shall be.

i want to thatnk you for showing me the way.
the way to my beloveds heart.
thank you for the kind words.
and the courage to be just who i am inside.

okies tks a bunches jeffers. me thanks you mucho! yous may not know me very well but i reads a lot of your poems and they encouraged me to just tell the one i love how i felt! thanks.
robin  


i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 08-04-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-08-04 12:37 PM


*sings* Loveeeeeeeeee is in the aaaaaairrrrrr!!!!!!!! LA LA LALA LAL ALA!!!!!!!!!!

Anyhow, nicely done here....it was sweeet

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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2 posted 2001-08-04 03:17 AM


nice poem robin HI ROBIN!!!! lol
good poem i liked it and i promise i like writing poems and we'll write one on msn again

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3 posted 2001-08-05 12:19 PM


LOL @ Dopes.

This whole forum is in a love/love lost stage... Aww, Robin!  This is so sweet!  Robin and Jeff, kissin' in a tree!  K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!  Hehe..  Nicely done!  I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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4 posted 2001-08-05 01:32 AM


ok first off jeff has his own girl and it ain't me all i was simply doing was thanking him! omg! jeff is cute yes but i have my own love and does he IT'S NOT ME!

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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5 posted 2001-08-06 03:02 AM


Robin, this is very sweet.

I am glad that you found a good meaning in my words!

Once again, thank you.  

~Jeff~

"Smoking kills. If you're killed, you've lost a very important part of your life."
-Brooke Shields

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6 posted 2001-08-07 03:34 AM


anytime jeff

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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