Teen Poetry #5 |
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Autumn's Awakening |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Autumn's Awakening Whispers echo amidst the wind Brushing past my ear in thoughtful twists and turns Within a silent wood Dreaming. The dreams of green are filled in colour With reds and golds against the roan Of leaves. And the wind... The wind with its feather-breathless wings Strokes the leaves And blurs the colour Among them. The trees stand proud in their attire Soon to be shed and lost Forever beneath the snow. And frost will replace the autumn gown And silver will conquer all. But that is far away still. The moon awakens the mist That covers the ground And playing among the trees They roam. The leaves flow down in rivers and streams To cover the barren bones of the earth In vain. The sound reminds me of the summer wind Sweet and soft Yet with a touch of flame Lying across the pale, blue sky. Indeed, Mother was showing off When she created The Autumn's Awakening... ==== Autumn's coming... ![]() ![]() -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
ryming for me is easy...*shows Leah his poets handbook*...haha..well, what can i say..ms.dreamer...the imagery was awesome, as always...enjoyed the read. "if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry- |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was very nicely done. You are adding color to our forums...literally. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
YAY!! ![]() ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This had awesome imagery... I loved it. Into my library it hops ![]() |
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