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And I Cried
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And I Cried |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Above the stars, And far beyond. I was watching the stones, Skipping across the pond. And I thought of you…. You said to me, If you could turn back time, You take back all those heartbreaks, And take our love back to its prime. I thought of our love…. My world was shattered, When you said you had to go. I thought I’d never see you again, The time went by oh so slow. I thought of what we missed…. I didn’t know what happened, Or what you had to go through. But we could’ve gotten past it, Cuz you know my love was true. I thought of what we could’ve been….. I don’t know how or when, But I always hoped you come back soon. As I looked up at the sun, I saw it was high noon. I thought of our summer days…. I knew my love would never die, And I could never stop loving you. The pain was too great, To help ease it, I knew what I must do. So I cried… I cried a lonely river, Of those hot pain-filled tears. As I watched them hit the ground, I looked back on those years. I thought of our love we had together… And I cried.... ~Mi dayz r cold without u, but I'm hurtin while I'm with u, I Know mi heart can't take no more I keep on running back to u...~Ashanti |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
omg! this was a greeeeeeeaaaaaaattttt poem! (like ttttony the tiger LoL) i weally liked it, cereally *LoL*!! Keep writing!! This is one of your best poems..I'm not sure who this is about..but I know it's someone who means a lot to you. Just tell me when you're ready! fok?  lylas ~Jess~*~Never take anything for granted~*~ |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
And i cried, good title because i did this moved me so well written and it touched the nerve of my lost love i can really relate to this. I hope your pain is not too strong and I hope we can get through it with the love of God. E-mail me if you would like to talk. Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thank u 4 the replies, i appreciate everyone.  ~Mi dayz r cold without u, but I'm hurtin while I'm with u, I Know mi heart can't take no more I keep on running back to u...~Ashanti |
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