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My Love, I Long For You
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My Love, I Long For You |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
My Love, I Long For You Oh, how I long to be near you Oh, how I wish I could confess This love I hold both pure and true To ease this troubled stress I long to see your face I long to see your eyes I long to have you to embrace My love, I long to say hi Oh, there you are The one I wish to call dear Approaching me from afar To wipe away my lonely tear Oh, take my hand, my love And lead me to a place I knew Through the open gates above Take me to a place near you Oh, come to me, my love Embrace me through and through Oh, I wish that I was a dove So I could fly away with you. Oh, say my name, my love And easy my troubled mind You’re the one I think the world of You’re the best of all mankind You’re all I wish to see You must truly know it’s true Forever, I longed for thee Because, I love you Any comments, good or bad, would be apriciated. A friend wanted me to write a love poem for her, so here it is. [This message has been edited by Encarta (04-01-2002 02:32 PM).] |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
Oh, shot. Sorry, I meant to post this at the teen peotry section. my bad. sorry |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
nice.. very well said  |
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Zengo Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 31Rogersville, AL |
Good Poem!! Reminds me very much of my poem Thee Uncatchable Star Good job, Nick |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahhh love <333333333 hehehe Sweet poem iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"Oh, how I long to be near you Oh, how I wish I could confess This love I hold both pure and true To ease this troubled stress" What a sweeeeeeeeeeeeet poem. The gentle way in which you describe your longing... it's lovely.  I can so relate to the lines above... more to these ones as well: "I long to see your face I long to see your eyes I long to have you to embrace My love, I long to say hi" So true!  The meter and flow and all that was splendid. Overall, a great piece! This one line is all I noticed: "You must truly know it’s true" Too many true's, truely I say to you.  ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
lol, brain freeze I meant to say you must surly know it's true. Oh well. I would change it, but I already gave it to the girl I wrote it for. |
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