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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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The cat ate the dog what ever happened to god he is dead in the red we no longer pray we play in the hay the girl is now a boy she is a toy the worm has turned listen but never speak yo bed but never sleep rise never wake world asleep BLANK. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
He he, a short yet entertaining poem. I really like this one Ina. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
nice, sounds like the end of the world  i like your poems. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I too, found this entertaining, although I found it a tad hard to read because the flow didn't work for me in some parts of the poem. The ending hit hard, hehe. It just kinda...laid there. Stared me in the face. yeah...*stares* Unsuspecting little thing... Anywho, I look forward to reading more from you. Good job! -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
wow i liked this "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
I found this poem to really interesting. good job until your next poem.. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina, I really liked this one. I think it says alot for being so short. It's an unusual poem for you, and I like it alot. Nice job Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one Regi! Well done here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this too me, came across...VERY deep...i liked it a lot, Ina. "if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry- |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I didn't like this one as much as I do your others... I found this to be more on the silly side, but that's probably not the intention. Thanks for sharing.. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
different...but unique...cool. " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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