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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
When we made love It was hard to tell If you were thinkin' of me Or someone else well now that we are through i have found a rebound someone new i have moved on realized i dont need you |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
This was short..yet it contained some powerful words. I can really relate to what the feelings in this one. ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I don't like the word "rebound." It makes it sound like this new girl is just a fling, no care involved. Perhaps thats the case though... Anyway- I liked the poem. Short, sweet, to the point, and w/ tons of power. Very well done. |
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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
whes not really a reboind and the effect was a fling though shes not, she thinks she is well bye bye |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was short but powerful goood work dude. Regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I find this to be straight forward and blunt. Very nicely expressed.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Well, you said what you wanted to say, and that's what's important  Thanks for sharing.. I enjoyed this.--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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