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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
The Angel flies She calls my name She caresses my head With her soft, snow white hands She lets me know that she cares I need to be loved I need to feel loved I need to feel your touch I need you by my side The angel, she flies Away carrying my heart in her hands I don't understand why she cares I don't understand why she loves me Why my angel? You need to know that i care You need to know I'm still here You need to feel my touch You need me so much There is no deciet in your sweet voice With your shoulder length hair That is blacked, streaked red It brushes my face It lets me know my angel is here Fly on my little angel Travel across the sea Never to return My angel But tell me of the things you see Your hazel eyes They stare into mine I feel your breath, coming on Fast, your lips touch mine Slowly we hold each other It's a dream, a state of mind My angel, she flies She flies away with my heart Leaving my body on the floor Leaving the rest for all of you But she can never have my soul My heart is hers |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  this is great I liked this part .... "I need to be loved I need to feel loved I need to feel your touch I need you by my side" oh and check your email for a special greeting! ~SEA |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 WELCOME TO PIP! I liked this. The description was done VERY well. Hope to see you posting/replying more in the near future. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Great poem, I know how you feel. Oh and WELCOME TO PIP! "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
 Welcome To PIP!!! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Welcome!!! This was a great write....Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to reading more! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Hola, and welcome to PIP! This was a really good first post, full of great imagery! You had a really solid ending, which was probably my favorite part in the whole piece. The poem had a nice, soft feeling to it, much like how we "visualize" angels. I hope to see more poetry from you! Thank you for a wonderful post. -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh get the lead out and give her your soul o yuh!!! good poem yuh got me into it Welcome to Passions  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great work. welcome to passions! i hope youll enjoy it here. I hope you share lots more of your poetry with us. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! Well done here. I fully enjoyed this first post!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I REALLY liked this! Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Very nice first post, the images are amazing! I really liked it. Thanks for posting it, and look forward to seeing more posts and replies in the future So keep posting all your work.--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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