Teen Poetry #5 |
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I don't want to let you go |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
I don't want to let you go to turn around and say goodbye to give up all we could have to not even try. I don't want to let you go to loose the one I love to let go of what I cling to when I've got no one else. I don't want to let you go to not have you in my life to give up all hope in us without even trying to fight. I don't want to let you go to loose all that I love to let them all win I don't want to let you go. ![]() Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I don't blame you for not wanting to let go- I wouldn't either. A great write here, Allysa. I liked it bunches. ![]() |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Alyssa ~ I loved this poem and can relate to it so much. I have been in a relationship before that no one would or even try to understand. We loved each other very much but everyone thought because we had an age diffrence we weren't allowed to love each other. This poem portrayed my emotions perfectly... I loved it. ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite hearfelt...and full of emotions...i hope all goes well for you. if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here Allysa. I liked this one a lot! very heart felt and I don't blame you.....Oh and I don't think i'll be able to do the collaboration ![]() ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I relate to this a lot. Saying good bye can sometimes suck...ok, it usually sucks. I hope things stay ok for you. Nice poem! Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like this, Allysa. These are hard feelings to work through. Good luck. *hugs* I hope you feel better. The poem is very well written. I really enjoyed this... I hope the situation turns out the way you want. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa --- just don't give up if you think he's really worth all the trouble. I just wanna wish you a good luck. *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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