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I Love You |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
You have to read this slowly, with patience. Love is a word four letters be Love is a poem we will soon see Love is like the clouds oh so wondering by where the wind blows is where it will fly Love is like a bird flapping this night sky where it decides to go not up to you nor I Love is like a flame fire it so burns with one sensual touch owch man that hurts and when this flame so dies charcole is thy name with time and the elements and things we can't tame as peaceful as the sky melts new lusiousness appears as green as an apple as sudden as a tear Love is like the rain one drop and you know a pour will then follow every corner, wet so flow Love is like the ocean so deep it is true it's space is the world just like me and you Love is like an Angel so true it is white she is pure beauty with not a single fright Love is like a flower with it's colourful grow it's path is so natural you have to let it flow Love is like a dog so incomplete it's true waiting oh so patiently for the simple touch of you Love is such four letters no word could describe nothing this earth could bring as you whisper to my I Love You |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Love is everything you said and more but until you experience it you wont understand it and you wont be able to put in words.But anyway I love your poem and keep up the great work. Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Okay I read it slow and payed attention like you said to (ain't cha proud? lol) and I really really like it! Great post and keep writing Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
The poem's great. Nice directions btw,  Bel |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a very emotional and artistic poem, you got all the true feelings of love in there and it was a very vibrant poem. Keep Writing ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
good poem, liked readin it keep em comin Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I like this poem alot. The best poems (to me) are the ones that try to capture a feeling in words, and you did just that. Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
great poem...it was very sweet You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, This was very well written and very nice!! Also true.. I really liked this peice thanks for writing and sharing it with us!!! Always, Amanda |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Yes, I agree with you.. reading it slowly gives more emotion.. I enjoyed this piece. VERY sweet, and the emotions your portray and deep and with passion. Nicely done. I hope to see more soon. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What really is love? Is love everything you've said and more Or is it none at all One of the myseteries of life don't ya think? Excellent write keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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