Teen Poetry #5 |
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Don't know tell you try |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello Everyone, I haven't been on in a while, I haven't written in a while either.. So I just wrote this one... And It's not the best but it's alright!! Talk to you all later bye bye You know how they have that quote, You will always have a feeling for that first love, Well from my heart and my point of view, Sad to say, but it's really true! It's been about 8 months since I've seen him last, I still think about him, dream about him, and even miss him I don't know why, He played, used, and hurt me The thing was, I loved him, it was not a two way street! Well, things have kind of changed I've got someone new, I think he really likes me He's different from what I'm used to moves slow and is a little shy It's been awhile, I really like him, But right now, I'm to afraid to fall in love again... I would compare it to, doing something you are really not good at, and having people laugh at you, all over again. It's really hard!! I think that I will try, All that can happen is I just get laughed at, But then again, maybe I will be the one laughing this time Laughing about how it turned out Laughing about how we turned out Or how long we lasted... I won't know tell I try! Thankyou for Reading Always, Amanda :) If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Hey, this one is great! I could never mess with a girl like that. ![]() ![]() "Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hey Amanda! ![]() I really liked this. Thought you showed your thoughtd very well. I'm sorry the first guy treated you badly...But don't hold it against the next one. Best of luck to you and your new relationship. Don't be afraid. ![]() ![]() |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
Wow this was really great! you express your feelings really well. I hope to see some more of your other poetry, and give this second guy a chance , like the old saying goes " it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all"! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Once our hearts have been broken...it is hard to love again..I am facing the same issue and I know how difficult it is. All I can say is take one day at a time...and I hope things work out for you. Hope to see more of you 'round here! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Moe, Spice, Thug, Nikki Thankyou all for replying!!! I really appreciate it! I hope to stay on-line, and to keep writing...! And I really am trying to give this guy a chance... Like I said what is there to loose? Him? Haha Thankyou, Amanda ![]() If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great expression of your feelings...i liekd this piece...and hope to see youa round more. "if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry- |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. I thought you did fine on it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely done. I really liked this... It was well written. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to see more from you soon! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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