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Raven Skye
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0 posted 2001-07-31 09:49 AM


Let's just say.... I'm in a writer's block and this poem/song/WHATEVER... is CRAzY!! I'm seriously losing it.. it's too early... i must go...


Birds are singing.
The telephone is ringing.

Sunday morning,
This is gettin' boring.

Gonna bake a cake today,
I'll probably give it all away.

It's cold outsideeee!!
Maybe I'll take a joyrideee,

TO GO SEEE GRANNDDMAA!!!!!

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

© Copyright 2001 Raven Skye - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-07-31 10:23 AM


Cute. Wackiness it alright.  

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Spice
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2 posted 2001-07-31 10:46 PM


Well it did make me smile.
Got me away from all the seriousness of the heartbreak/depression poems I've been reading. I liked it. Hehe  
BTW- How was the date?

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3 posted 2001-08-01 02:28 AM


...i needed it. thanks.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

Raven Skye
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4 posted 2001-08-01 08:57 AM


I'll post how the date was in teen explorer!

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

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5 posted 2001-08-03 03:54 AM


This was just weird haha......I liked it  
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6 posted 2001-08-04 05:11 PM


Haha.. this is crazy!  LOL, thanks for the good laugh  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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